Talk: Killing Sims

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Skydiving Simulator[]

I say that the part about it being funny, and thus still worth considering, is important. I understand the need to wikify, but I feel that at least some praise for the skydiver death is deserved. (On a semi-related note: WHEEEEE! :D) P.S. I never get tired of that death XD User:Pupdude (talk) 01:36, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Sims 4[]

Deaths in Sims 4 should be added:

Starvation
Fire
Electrocution
Embarrassment
Anger
Laughter
Cowplant
Old Age
Overexertion (WooHooing too much as an elder)

Simsilikesims (talk) 03:34, October 2, 2014 (UTC)

Clean-up[]

I'm confused. What's left to clean up?

Cryptic Lynx (talk) 16:14, December 15, 2014 (UTC)

I'd say the general layout of this page is untidy. You can see there are huge gaps between sections (due to extra lines being inserted at the end of a section). I also think the structure of the content is very weak. Some of the contents are very detailed while some others are just written in formality. The writing style of each section can sometimes be seen contrasting. Some look serious, while some others are like lazily written.

The format of writing is inconsistent too. Expansion packs are generally italicized, and capitalization is used inconsistently and unnecessarily for many keywords, like Sarcophagus and Drowning. You can say the content needs cleanup in general.

Alright, I will try to work on that, and the massive spaces were my fault. Cryptic Lynx (talk) 17:29, December 16, 2014 (UTC)